Chapter 5 - First Proof Editing Complete

Tonight I finished making the changes from my first Chapter 5 proof, and more than half of Chapter 6. Proof 2 of 5 is printed, and I transferred it to MS Word and did some minor formatting.

As of now, (and for now, as everything is subject to change) the Main Characters' names are Graedin (Michael) and Brand (Brad). I don't hate these names, and they feel less "American", so I feel it's a pretty good start.

Still on schedule for next milestone.

Good night!