CHAPTER 8!

Woohoo!  Four chapters sent out now!  Chapter 8 is leaner, better, and more fun than any of the previous chapters, in my opinion.

I hope my readers enjoy it.

The next few chapters will be from Brand's point of view.  I may take a little extra time on Chapter 9 so that I can outline in detail, create new characters, and develop a writing style that suits Brand's character.

I'm thinking the style will need to be:

• Less observational
• More emotional
• More straightforward
• Less emphasis on internal dialog and agonizing over choices and situations.

The point is, Brand will need to be a blunt dude who takes life as it comes and I need the writing to reflect this.

Should be a fun part of the book.